[12 piece bucket]

I think you gotta shorten that arm swing and get your right shoulder trajectory to work LESS VERTICAL and MORE OUT. I'll follow up with another post. But look at Hogan's right shoulder shoulder motion it is working down yes . . . but also OUT. If you are going to be a Hitter . . . You need to understand the backstop and the Launching Pad . . . . Are you trying to do Stack and Tilt? Your right shoulder (left or trail) works too vertical to the ground. That's more of a "spinning the fly wheel motion" ala swinging. The Hitter's shoulder right shoulder should stay HIGH ala Hogan and then work down AND OUT. Have a look at this.