[EdZ]

A few quick thoughts on your address...

From down the line, it looks almost like your hands are pulled inside your shoulder line (might be camera angle)

You'll find it easier to get back to impact if you setup with the hands in a higher position, with a level right wrist, and your right forearm much more relaxed and closer to the angle of the shaft. you should be able to see a bit of the left forearm at address from the down the line view.

From face on, turn your left foot out about 15 degrees. You have a very square foot position and that restricts how well you can use your pivot, and how much lag pressure you can create. That might seem like a small detail, but it really will let you use your hips for power, using the pivot to drag the arms and really loading PP#4.