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Lots of nice stuff there Whip. Love how your left hip is back while your sliding your hips left. Slide with a Delayed Turn as Lynn teaches it not as photo'd in the book. Lynn clarified this whole thing on this forum once upon a time. A must read IMO as this move is critical. Hogan in the photo below appears to demonstrating Slide with a Delayed Turn as Lynn teaches it I believe.

You're really trying to get your right elbow in front there , I try to as well and for the same reason ....delayed release . Ill unbend my right elbow to make it a past a stuck right hip... unbending being release and earlier than snap. I suspect Hogan worked on the right elbow passing the hip too given the other photo below. If memory serves this photo was taken as part of a right elbow drill which was presented in Power Golf.

Nice impact and Follow Through, both arms straight. Thats some nice passive right arm thrust , cross line all the way to both arms straight per 1-L something. Oops missed that photo but I saw it . Did Bucket ever talk to you about your head movement post both arms straight? He did with me way back when . Its interesting stuff.