As a an aside, the second picture is a VERY common move and one of the single biggest reasons that people can't square up the face - a bad takeaway that is both too inside and, ironically, overplane, or 'laid off'
Keeping the clubhead 'outside' the hands until hip high is the key to fixing this.
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