Im with Bucket here. Little bit of face issue maybe keeps you closed up; stop and steer to the right. Good motion overall. Hold the swords guys, but the LAST thing I want this man to do as a student (competitive, tough and athletic) is grind in the yellow book. If TGM is your thing, just find a TGM instructor and remain a "player".
Those Hogan photos are a good place to start also, kind of opposites: different face, lowpoint movement and tracing.......................
No argument from me JT. I get a little too excited about my own studies. I wouldn't teach that way on the range, but switch modes when I enter the forum. Thanks for the great advice!
Kevin
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